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Post by Vampire_of_Death on June 17th 2010, 11:56 pm

I'd say this lot needs some work. Its a very interesting concept and ot could be made better by:

Lets start with the slide area:
-fixing that sharp hill up to the slides. It looks very unnatural. Why don't you make it look like a mountain with some grooves and indents and the like. Add terrain paint to add some dirt and stone and rocks and even sand, what ever you want. Add some small ground ivy or ferns to this area, not much, but enough to make it look natural. Then you can plop your stairs on your mountain.
-I think you mountain is too high, Maybe make one of the slides that high, but make one medium sized and a small one. This also would fit in with the bumpy mountain terrain you can create that I suggested before.
- The three slides at top look too uniform, this maybe fixed with the three different heights of slides, but I would add some cement pathways, something to walk on and maybe add some small flower boxes up top. The bar up there, as it is, looks totally out of place

Bathrooms:
As far as I can tell, they look fine, could you ppost some pictures of those?

Stand:
This I would rebuild. I would make a small indoor area for food and dining, and have the rest have a roof over it, like a shaded area, like a concession stand. I'll post a sample picture in a bit to show you what I mean. All the areas outside seem to clash and should be removed. If you want to have the tiki bar than you should consider making a tiki themed park. I would also move the pool further away from the eating area.

With all the changes, I would seriously consider starting over and on a larger lot. I know its hard to hear, but the way it is it probably will not be accepted. If you don;t want to do this, I would consider removing one or two of your slides (since its a simple water park, I would stay simple) and make them end in the same pool (which they probably should anyways) and trying to get a theme going. Let me know what you want to do and I will be happy to help in anyway possible through it all. Smile


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Post by GuardStud08 on June 18th 2010, 12:00 am

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Post by GuardStud08 on June 18th 2010, 10:35 am

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Post by WhiteWaterWood on June 18th 2010, 1:53 pm

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But anyway...

She is stupid.

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Post by Vampire_of_Death on June 18th 2010, 3:00 pm

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Post by Rapsheba555 on June 18th 2010, 6:39 pm